Assignment 2 feedback

I have got back my assignment 2 grade and it was not that good and certainly there is something I should work on. Generally, I have problem in determining the thesis and the main points of the essay and unfortunately that is the main thing in writing a summary. Mr. Victor gave feedback for my essay and he explained what I did wrong. From his feedback, I notice that my weaknesses are organization and context. I definitely should work more on organizing an essay as well as the context. I hope I could write a better essay next time.

First 2 weeks of classes !

After two weeks of Engl250 classes, I think, it went pretty well. I'm in a cross culture class, so I got to know more people from other countries. The lecturer was really friendly and one thing that he did in class was playing music before the class started. It creates a good mood for everybody and it makes the class more interesting. The materials for the course so far are good as we haven't started any assignment yet =). But I have learned new things such as creating a blog and this is my 4th post. It is quite a good start for me writing a blog. After all, I really enjoyed the classes and can't wait for the upcoming classes!

BLOG EXERCISE 1

I am quite sure everybody knows Mr. Bean, because of his silent comedy.  Here is a very good silent comedy from Gamarjobat. Take a look ! =)

Argument?

Why do we always arguing with each about almost everything? Where to eat? Which dress is better? Which team is the best? The reason is, everybody has their own opinion and everyone's opinion is different. Argument occur when people defending their opinion with reasons and facts. Not all arguments are bad and in fact, most of them are useful. Arguments could lead us to the best answer or decision when we need to have one. The most important thing is, we have to be more mature in arguing. Try to accept others opinions so we could live a better life together.

I Have A Blog!!

Woooohoooooo...!!